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Wish i have my own apartment by *dhedheahmed:icondhedheahmed:


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Submitted: November 29, 2007
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i made this image using 3dsmax 8 rendered with vray and edited with photoshop...just another worthless piece of image i guess...
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Worthless? I don't really think so. I personally think this looks very good.

However,

It would be nice to see something besides the 'standard overexposed white CG background' through the windows. Perhaps a skyscape or other structures adjacent to the apartment. If you went along that route, you could insert them into your scene and rerender to get subtle blue reflections instead of pure white.

I also think the pattern to the left of the window can be repositioned so it looks less like a wall in the mirror's reflection. Perhaps set its bottom at the top of the couch.

The TV seems a bit too reflective...you may consider toning it down just a bit.

Your composition looks great and the image looks pleasing, but these minor improvements will really make this look all the better.

Kind regards,

- MH
wah render bagus gini dibilang worthless?? *bacok*

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gee thanks for the supportive crits...i'll fix it soon
This is in no way worthless render... I wish I could make something like this... It looks so real.. :+fav:

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Best of luck to you.

Kind regards,

- MH

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